Friday, September 23, 2011

Human Referees versus Electronic Referees

Human Referees
 Versus
 Electronic Referees

Author’s note: This year the NFL added several new rules and tools to the game, including instant replays on every scoring play. This triggered tons of thoughts in my head about referees in general and how they compare. I am focusing on grammar, an intriguing introduction, and a thoughtful conclusion.

There is only two seconds left in the game. Twenty four seventeen clearly reads the scoreboard. They disperse from the huddle and prepare for the snap. “Hike!” screams the quarterback. Half a dozen receivers tear down the field. The ball is chucked into the end zone.  It’s right on target! Touchdown!  You scream running around the room. As you return to the television the referee signals no good. He stepped out of bounds on his second step. The game is over. Your team lost. After the game, you watch the replay and it turns out the receiver was in bounds. The referee made a terrible call, but could you have done any better? With the new technology it isn’t even sports anymore. The best referee is one that will call a game fairly and realistically, and the best way to accomplish that is with human referees. 

Human referees are the only judges we have ever seen. Human Referees create more jobs for the plummeting economy.  An advantage of a human referee is they can judge the penalty. If the penalty didn’t have an effect on the play why is it worth calling? This is a major flaw in an electronic referee.

In football, if every player was reviewed on every down, imagine how long every play would take. The first quarter would last two hours with all the commercial breaks and the not so instant replays. Although they would be accurate, most of the penalties would not even matter. There would be multiple fouls, creating even more rules to complicate the game. The only point where electronic refs would be useful is on scoring plays. The electronic ref could easily make a call through programming. Except, you still have the problem of an unimportant penalty being called.  In football, electronic referees will cause a train wreck.

An electric umpire may be a different story though. An electronic home plate umpire will make the right call every pitch. One flaw in baseball is the definition of the strike zone.  Different umpires have different feelings about what is a strike and what isn’t.  Every game is different for that reason. Electronic umpires will continue to call the same pitch a strike every game.

Watching baseball today, the telecasts have a strike zone on the side of the screen. It tells you if a pitch was a strike. Although, half the time the human umpire will call a baseball at your feet a strike even though on the side screen it was a ball. This adds an advantage to the fans so they can see every pitch, but it creates more stress for the viewers when the wrong call is made. It is not that referees are making worse calls than they used to, it is just that the new technology will tell you if it is right or wrong showing things only computers can show you.

Technology in sports has huge advantages though. In horse racing and NASCAR, if technology wasn’t used, photo finishes would not be available and tough and inaccurate calls would be forced without them. A replay will show you something you never should see. If a penalty or call is wrong, and can only be proven incorrect through zooming in and slow motion. I believe that is unthinkable. Take this instance, a wide receiver catches the ball in the end zone. Then it is reviewed, and usually ends up that he didn’t have full possession for the half of a second it counted. A better example of this is if you are playing a piece on the piano, and you miss one note. Almost everyone wouldn’t notice. But with advanced electronic judges everyone would realize you messed up.

Electronic referees should not be used extensively in sports throughout the world, only when it is essential.  Too many reviews lead to lengthy games which lead to bored fans. Yet a review when it is necessary makes the game more interesting. Reviews should be at the speed they were taken at not several times as slow. A combination of human referees and seldom, accurate reviews formulate the best way to judge sports.

Response to Fantasy Sports


Author's note:  I have been playing fantasy football for a while and wondered how it was invented. I wanted to learn more so I went more in depth. In this piece I am working on format.

32 million Americans signed up for a fantasy sport last year.  Through the last four years participation has grow by over sixty percent. Why are fantasy sports so popular in our society today? What are the origins of this amazing entertainment? Fantasy sports are the best way to turn your bland day into a thrilling competition. 

1963 was the first season of fantasy football.  Eight partners of the Oakland Raiders where in the first fantasy football league. They created a bizarre scoring system and a wide range of player positions. Not till 1988 was this outdated system re-thought. Without their amazing idea there may not be Fantasy games today. 

For few people Sunday is a day of rest. For me I am glued to the TV hoping my wide receiver gets every pass for a touchdown.  Fantasy football gives you a reason to watch other team’s games not just your favorite.  People today live for this stuff (including me), a simulation of your favorite sport sometimes with a cash prize.  An entertaining game you that gives a reward, cannot be beat. 

Through the success of fantasy games new ones have begun, fantasy cricket being the newest. With the growing trend in its prime, will new fantasy sports begin? Fantasy track and field, horse racing, and little league baseball come to mind. The number one way to make your day more exciting is through fantasy sports.

Monday, September 19, 2011

Sunset Shore

 
Author's note: In this piece I am focusing on vivid vocabulary and sentence structure.
 
As you lay on the gravel your muscles unwind. A reviving massage you’ve finally obtained. The pebbles are lukewarm giving a quiet sensation. A tropical breeze whisks your hair, chilling you from the warmth. You sit up to gaze upon the horizon. Marlin are soaring out of the water as the sun sets once more. A crimson cloak forms around the sun. It sets unnoticed as the mirror in the water projects the suns withdrawal, and the moons entrance.  The silvery water is an acrylic portrait of the towering moon.  The time is late. the moon is already halfway across the sky. You take to you feet and walk off on the frozen pebbles.

Tuesday, September 13, 2011

Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince chapter 15

Who is the Half Blood Prince?

Author’s note: In the book Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince, Harry gets an old book and it has cheats to making potions. The person who owned the book is the Half Blood Prince, but they do not know who it is. In this book response I state my predictions on who is the Half Blood Prince.

After a great weekend you completely forget about your homework that is being gone over in class. You open your text book to the page to find all the answers written in. There are shortcuts and tips covering the book from the title page to the glossary. You check the front of the book for the person who had it last. Only one name stands alone in the box. The name is the Half Blood Prince. Harry is using a past owner to help him get grades he does not deserve. He wants to know who it was who is getting him through his toughest subject.  The Half Blood Prince has to be Voldemort.

The Half Blood Price could be loads of people. My first guess was that it was James Potter. I thought so because when he was enrolled in Hogwarts, he used the same spells that were written in the margins of the text book. I quickly doubted my first impression because James Potter is not a half blood. Before I began to investigate for new possibilities I made sure they fit the description of the Half Blood Prince.

At every one of Harry’s lessons with Dumbledore, they go into a pensive. A pensive is a bowl with silvery liquid in it, when you touch it you will be sucked into the memory inside of the pensive. When Harry was in the pensive with Dumbledore, he was seeing Dumbledore’s memories. The first recollection clearly dealt with the parents of Voldemort. His parents were descendants of Salazar Slytherin, and the muggle family Riddle, making Voldemort a Half Blood. The second pensive contained Voldemort as a kid. It showed Voldemort without known any magic, already controlling it for evil uses. When at Hogwarts he certainly used agitating spells also in the text book to torture others.

Harry is connected to Voldemort in ways that only few people know. I believe that Harry received this book not by accident, but on purpose. Either someone wants him to succeed or get caught. It could be Slughorn trying to get his favorite student straight A’s. It could be Snape trying to get Harry expelled.  Lord Voldemort must be the Half Blood Prince.