Author's note: This post is about the possibility of an invasive species. I am focusing on sentence structure in this piece.
While vast majorities of large species in the Pacific Ocean are slowly dying out, a sizable creature of the deep is uprising. They range to six feet long and to one hundred pounds. Often eating their peers, they will devour almost anything they set their mind on. These ferocious cephalopods are creating a high profile for themselves across the Pacific. The Humboldt Squid has the best ability to overpopulate the oceans.


Many things are unknown about the Humboldt. Questions about spawning and prey are still left hanging due to the extreme depths the squid go to. Numbers of the Humboldt are unknown because of how deep they live as well. As of today they aren’t too many Humboldts inhabiting the Pacific Ocean, but tomorrow they may be across the globe. The deadliest threat to overpopulate the oceans is the Humboldt Squid.
I thought you did good with the sentence structure.
ReplyDeleteI thought you used really good vocabulary in this piece.